Recently I was
diagnosed with malaria, typhoid and blood infection. And this recently was last
august, 2011. During my two week vacation in the hospital I discovered that a nurse
is somehow the most fascinating personality at a place which mostly advertises gloomy
and depressing faces.
Amid broken legs, irritated stomachs and smelly bed
sheets, the young virgin (seems to be) girl wanders with her flashy bangles, sparkling
earrings and echoing sandals. Carrying a smile on her face she cracks a joke or
two with the patients who find themselves on their death bed.
She might not
be worried about the stalled hospital clock but she is very particular with the
shade of her lipstick. Her fashion statement comes out loudly with her nail
polishes ranging from light green, dark blue, brown, silver and at times orange
with white polka dots.
She finds her glorious moment while penetrating a drip
in a patient’s vein. With half closed eyes, a little nervousness shining on her
forehead and a blushing face she behaves as if she is stitching a button on her
husband’s shirt on a bright Monday morning.
With abundant patients around there
is hardly any time for a nurse to even breathe but the clever girl can be
easily spotted chit-chatting or playing with her hair.
She is the diva; she is
the heartthrob of the place. No doubt she becomes the central character of the
wet dreams of many patients. And with so many fantasies lurking around her, why
the world is bombarded with porn films featuring a nurse is beyond question.
She somehow fits the bill.
But that’s not
only about this class that interests me. The stupidity of men has forced this
world to go through most destructive of the wars. Wars, in which he got
severely injured, lost almost everything he had, or worse, died. It was only
during these armed struggles when somebody was needed to take care of the dying
men, to get them back in the war territory. And therefore a nurse came for the
rescue.
One of the
reasons why a nurse is a female in almost every corner of the world is because
this profession demands extensive caring and sensitivity. And who has that
better than a woman. No one can do it better than them. The century’s old
decision to place a female in the boots of a nurse must be taken on the ground that
a woman and her fashion is a reason enough for men in tough situations to
regain hope and enthusiasm in life.
So recently
when I was diagnosed, the only wish of my broken body and a young heart was, that I didn't want to call this diva in a dead place, a ‘sister’.
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Feel free to criticize....
8 comments:
As per your order,I wish to submit my comments:-
Some great person said that "A man must laugh at himself". I am glad that you could think of humour where every one is gloomy.
The end to the story was perfect but at the middle when suddenly i was going deep, the water became shallow. You ended the story. I wanted to go deeper and deeper but you pulled me out.
Nonetheless, the article is beautifully writeen and deserves and applause.
Regards
Very well written, your sarcasm is perfecting itself with every article....
Enjoyed reading this. I was going serious throughout wondering, okay cross that, admiring, your observation and descriptions! And I laughed at the last line. :P
Keep writing! :)
bro.... the article is so vivid and sensual and yet not vulgar or porn...
you very well know where to draw the lakshman rekha....!!! Well written!!
Regards
Neeraj Bharti
I love it.. It is so well written.. Keep it up!!!
Sonam Chabrra
i read ur write up
so lemme be honest
i love d thought
and i absolutely enjoyed the first 4 paa's
para's
with the flowery wrirting
the descriptions were very clear n fun
but someow the last para seemed a bit forcefir
force fit
there was an abrubt change of emotion from...funny....romantic to suddenly ,..very factual and serious...n den ur last line again flips to a humourous sde
so work on d flow a bit....
i'm not being rude.....just recommending something i felt as a reader....coz dude u gt a talent in writing....
also if u can edit den do dese punctuation changes..." With abundant patients around(comma) there is hardly any time for a nurse to even breathe(full stop) But the clever girl can be easily spotted(comma) chit-chatting or playing with her hair. "
oh and one more thing...........just love d title!
Sonali Chowdhary
this was nice sirjee, shared it on my wall
Yashwardhan Gupta
nyc... kept smiling til d end... so nw u knw my nerve as u urslf declard my reaction to dis... interesting!!! :)
comin to d article, lovd d analogy of injecting medicine to wife stiching button, nail art to polka dots, awsome!!!
btw, d first analogy was so real, it felt like a strong personal experience... i wud love to knw hw mch wer u blushing at dat moment... :P
n did u manage to get hr personal details or r content wid just dreaming??? :P
-nidhi bindal
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